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Wednesday 26 August 2020

the tomb

 

the tomb or waking giant this week we were using on image as a story starter. check out my tuhituhi,


My name is Tom and is about may 25th 2019. I was digging hard . I had to work , work, I feel like I can’t take it. it anymore . then we went to Egypt I was digging with my mates and we fell in a old 3000 BC Egypt  graveyard 

“ Where are we? “ said Jake. I think we are in a graveyard from 3000 BC I whispered . After we tried to get out I tried to claim it and then we screamed. We screamed so hard no one could hear us. I went more in the place it was getting dark, I grabbed my touch to see but then I saw a tomb.Hey Jake I found a tomb with a door came over here

“Wait what ? a tomb with a door “ said Jake yes came look, look ! I shutout . I tried to open the door. It was hard then when I used the tomb I did not know what to do with it but bang it right on the door BANG BONG ! hey I got it . I looked instead it a cage with a sheet . I whispered to Jake hey I think have something over here

“Well is it” he said I don’t know  as we both went together we kept hearing this heavy sound going on and on. As we went closer it showed us with fear . it broke its cage we ran for our lives with the tomb . After running I start to think about the tomb“ Well I say we keep it so we could rule with that thing “ no we are not we are going to take this  back where we found it . so Jake was cross he had taken the tomb  and it started to glow then the glow went to us what was happening .

 “ see Jake I told you we need that tomb”  as I saw Jake he became to grow into a ruthless monster as he was turning as I did too. But I was different to Jake I grow two wings on my back and sword look as a angle Jake you have stop  

“  no tom you don’t know how it feels have no friends it was just me “ said Jake in a deep voice  then me and Jake both hit each other and blow us away then it start to spread people turning good and bad as the war began the whole world and everything changed then me and Jake knew we were enemies for over 1000,000 years tell it was just us at the end of the world when stab Jake with my sword and it over yes I did  it really done 

“ You are coming with me “  as we both died with a sword . 








DinseadDan had been digging all morning. Along with his team of fellow archaeologists, countless tons and dirt and sand had been removed. At first the mechanical diggers had done their bit, to be followed by spades and shovels. Now, as the team neared their prize, their tools became trowels and delicate brushes.

Hours of sweat and toil in the blistering heat had brought little reward as yet, but things were about to change. Dan stood in front of what he hoped would be the most significant discovery of his career so far, and gently began to untie the knot that had sealed the door for thousands of years…


1 comment:

  1. Chur sione its me your best friend i like your story very sad at the end and wish you goodluck with your blog chur later bao

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