I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Sione. WOW! THis machine looks like it would be super helpful to get the crops out of the ground. It looks like it could also pick fruit from the tallest trees. It would of been great if you had added text to tell us what parts of the machine does what. Keep up the great ideas.
Kia ora Sione, thanks for sharing your Matariki machine. It would have been really helpful if you had included captions and headings to explain how your machine works. Mr R
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia ora Sione.
ReplyDeleteWOW! THis machine looks like it would be super helpful to get the crops out of the ground. It looks like it could also pick fruit from the tallest trees. It would of been great if you had added text to tell us what parts of the machine does what.
Keep up the great ideas.
Kia ora Sione, thanks for sharing your Matariki machine. It would have been really helpful if you had included captions and headings to explain how your machine works.
ReplyDeleteMr R