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Friday 23 October 2020

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 Go boy get me milk said  Tommy nana as he  scooter to the shop but it was out I ask the man when are you bring new milk 

“  5:10” the man said okay as he went back to nana on my scooter 

“ why you late BOY “ said nana it  was far and they ran out of milk hhhhhhhh. Next day everyone in town went insane there was no milk . Tommy then tries to find why it is all gone . He went to the cows they were red dry so he  fed them . Later  owns a milk shop for everyone.
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2 comments:

  1. Mrs Cassidy29 October 2020 at 16:30

    Kia ora Sione.
    That was so nice that the man shared the milk from the cows with everyone.
    I hope that they repay his kindness by helping to look after the cows.
    Maybe next time you could re-read your writing to make sure that you have punctuation in the right place.
    Thank you for sharing your story with us.

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  2. Mrs Cassidy3 November 2020 at 16:43

    Ka ora Sione.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.I can't wait to see your next learning post.

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