At camp it could be your Last not because you don’t come back but because you never Leave
their was boy name ben, you see ben was a bad boy because
He will make fire and fire the trees, and Everyone smell the Burning roasted trees and you can hear people crying and some people run for their life after the fire
Then one of the camp call ben ,mum, and ben, was so Afraid of his mum, because when ben was at his old school he was the same as like his camp so ben runaway so far he went in a cave Hiding then it was 5 hour and ben was Still hiding then at 3.56pm and ben, Bearing Another tree.
Hello Sione.You have used some great descriptive words.I like how you described the trees as 'burning roasted'.Just remember that peoples names need capital letters as they are proper nouns and need a capital.Have a great day and I look forward to reading more of your posts.
ReplyDeletethanks you for comments
DeleteHello Sione.
ReplyDeleteThis is just to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Have a great day.
Kia ora Sione,
ReplyDeleteIt's Nikita from Yaldhurst Model School, I've read through your writing and I find not just the image but the piece of writing you provide, but I find it quite interesting what the image might be about, did you get a answer? What did you think this image looked like? Did your group work well?
Interesting Work, Kai Pai!
Nikita