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Friday, 3 May 2019

tuhituiuh week 1 bad camp

this week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using  a picture to help us . first we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was  about , then we brainstorm some adjectives. finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. thanks !
At camp  it could be your Last
not because you don’t  come back but because you never Leave
their was boy name  ben, you see ben was a bad boy because  
He will make   fire and fire the trees, and Everyone smell the Burning roasted trees  and you can hear people crying and some people run for their life after the fire

Then one of the   camp call ben ,mum, and ben, was so Afraid of his mum,  because when ben was at his old school he was the same as like his camp so  ben runaway so far he went in a cave Hiding then it was 5 hour and ben was Still hiding then at 3.56pm and ben, Bearing  Another tree.